I'm Not Afraid to Keep On Living

Anybody want to do a quick read-through of my 14Valentines fic? It's My Chemical Romance, and pretty much gen, although there is mention of canon het. Short, 2000 words.

Please?

Basically I'm looking to make sure it makes sense, and that its not horrible.

Thanks!

Written for 14valentines for Day 2 -- Transgender Awareness. This is a short Bandom story, gen, approximately 2200 words.

Title: What Pronoun Do You Prefer?
Author: Gemmi999
Rating: PG-13 (there's some swearing)
Pairing: Gen, with some canon het hints
Author's Notes: Thanks to jukeboxromeo and xelafic for looking this story over in its various stages of completeness. I appreciate it!

Summary: It was a well known fact that Gerard prefered to shower as little as possible while on tour. He really preferred to shower as little as possible when not on tour as well, but Lyn-z was very much in favor of regular hygeine, and she often had him by the balls (in a more then metaphorical manner), and so daily showers became a regular part of his life. On tour though, when she wasn't around to entice him into the shower, Gerard occasionally went a full week without a shower. And even longer before doing laundry.

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